script

Scene 1

 Script 1

 Ext.outside (raining)

 Jermaine(14,tall,anti-social,moody) shaniqua(14,loud,rude,bossy)

 

  Scene 1

 

Jermaine is walking into school ,cant see were hes going and cant balance. He is finding it hard to concentrate because of the drugs he took before he left out hes house

As Jermaine bumps into shaniqua on he’s way into school

Shaniqua (wide shots)

Whats going on with you doe? Cyan see taaraated

Jermaine (amgrly&droopy)

Move man

Shaniqua (rudly,jokly)

Chaa ,don’t get rude no who your talking to babes.

Jermaine

Why you talking doe, before I expose you.

School bell ring

Everyone rushed to their lesson 1, pushing and shoving, while Jermaine walked slowly to his lesson1

Jermaine (wide shot, looking at the camera)

Sorry im late miss

Teacher (wide shot)

Its ok Jermaine since your sorry

Jeamine walked into the lesson

Shaniqua looked at him mysteriously and noticed that he was fiddling with somethink in hes pocket that she heard a packet opening at the back of classroom coming from jemaine pocket

The lesson finished.

Everyone got out of there seat without being dismissed by the teacher

  Jeamain walked swiftly out of the classroom while shaniqua following but trying not to be obvious that’s shes following him

 

Shaniqua

Iknow your hiding somethink give to me!

Jermaine

No why should I , your just a normal girl that goes my school , idont like you . so why do you care about me or what im doing just leave me alone whatever is happening between me and my girlfriend has nothink to do with you so move.

Shaniqua

k. I never involved your clapped girlfriend in this conversation so she can c herself out

Jermaine

don’t chat me like were size ,(looks at her up and down)

your butters and all the mandem no that n that’s why you don’t get man, you follow and beg man so low your talks.

Shaniqua

Am I the one who sells drugs for a living, am i the one who  lives in a care home and don’t have a mum. So don’t try hype

Jermaine

Why did I even like you…. Like your butters and you beat anyman , like yo mum iyte.

Shaniqua

Ite, I was only joking about the care bit , that’s abit too deep I take that back.

Jermaine

Iyte owel it’s the truth life goes on

Shaniqua

Yeah , but aint you gonna tell me whats in your pocket doe

Shaniuqa tried to grab for his pocket to feel what’s in there. But Jermaine glanced back in fright

Jermaine

No I’m not gonna tell you cause your gunna start running up your mouth asyou always do. And plus if the feds catch me or anyone then I’m deep crap

Shnaiqua

Iyte iyte iyte mm I get you babes

Can I have a hug doe I’ve been longing for one you get me

Jermaine

Ermmm, beg man don’t give hugs to dopeys like you, who eat any man, and crave for paper (laughing)

Shaniqua

(Kisses her teeth) chaa man your to faystey

Jermaine

(Laughing)

Jermaine

Joking

Jermaine hugs shaniqua (close up)

Jermaine walks

 fast down to the staircase on his way  to his next lesson.shaniqua follows

On there way down the stairs to the 4^th floor

Shaniqua

Wag warn with you doe you seem abit scared, and angry , plus you don’t walk abit straight and your facial expressions , it just doesn’t feel the same you ,when I look at you and when I chat to you ,like are you iyte or something

Jermaine

Yeah…yeah…yeah… im all good

Shaniqua put her leg out to trip Jermaine over , as jeamine trips he bangs his head on the stair and twists his ankle.

Scene 2

Script 2

Ext hospital (apple centre)

Jemaine wakes up in hospital looking around to see where is he is because he cant make out that his in hospital with his blurry vision

Jermaine (blinks twice, close up)

Where am I

Doctor

Right his up everyone

Nurses and doctors and social worker. rushed through the curtains with there clipboards,papers and belongings.

Jermaine hesitated and tries to figure out why hes in hospital.

As the social worker stepped forward and introduced herself to Jermaine,

Social worker

Hello, I’m Sarah Jane I work for social services, and  I’m your social worker I have been longing to meet you, other than that I am here to take you to your new care home were you would be staying until we could find you a place near your school, or contact your parents,

We have documented the accident with your mum and I’m sorry for your lost , but we have managed to contact her grandparents.

Jermaine (confused tone of voice, towards the camera, close up)

Ooohhh ok

Nurse

 IDon’t think Jermaine is feeling to good , so we should give him some time to relax ,and most probably we would dismiss him from the hospital around 7 or later.

Social worker

Alright I would wait in the waiting area or possibly contact my boss and let them no his ok.

Nurse and doctor shock hands with the social worker and said there goodbyes, as the doctor threw Jermaine his clothes.

Jermaine held his trousers and his jacket and jumper tight.

Jermaine had realised that he last had something in he’s pocket

He felt for his pocket and the drugs were gone.

                   

 

 

 

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