Scene 1
Script 1
Ext.outside (raining)
Jemaine(14,tall,anti-social,moody)
shaniqua(14,loud,rude,bossy)
Scene 1
Jemaine is walking into school ,cant see were
hes going and cant balance. He is finding it hard to concentrate bbecause of
the drugs he took before he left out hes house
As jemaine bumps into shaniqua on hes way
into school
Shaniqua
Whats going on with you doe? Cyan see
taaraated
Jemaine (amgrly&droopy)
Move man
Shaniqua (rudly,jokly)
Chaa ,don’t get rude no who your talking to
babes.
Jemaine
Why you talking doe, before I expose you.
School bell ring
Everyone rushed to their lesson 1, pushing
and shoving, while jemaine walked slowly to hes lesson1
Jeamine
Sorry im late miss
Teacher
Its ok jemaine since your sorry
Jeamine walked into the lesson
Shaniqua lokked at him mysteriously and
noticed that he was fiddling with somethink in hes pocket that she heard a
packet opening at the back of classroom coming from jemaine pocket
The lesson finished.
Everyone got out of there seat without being
dismissed by the teacher
Jeamain walked swiftly out of the classroom
while shaniqua following but trying not to be obvious that’s hses following him
Shaniqua
Iknow your hiding somethink give to me!
Jemaine
No why should I , your just a normal girl
that girls my school , idont like you . so why d o you care about me or what im
doing just leave me alone hwta ever is happening between me and my girlf reidn
has nothink to do with you so move.
Shaniqua
k. I never involved you clapped girlfriend in
this conversation so she can c herself out
jemaine
don’t chat me like were size ,(looks at her
up and down0
your butters and all the mandem no that n
that’s why you don’t get man, you follow and beg man so low your talks.
Shaniqua
Am I the one who sells ddrug for a living,
ami the one who live in a care home and
don’t have a mum. So don’t try hype
Jemaine
Why did I even like you…. Like you butters
and you beat anyman , like yo mum iyte.
Shaniqua
Ite, I was only joking about the care bit ,
that sabit too deep I take that back.
Jemaine
Iyte owel it’s the truth life goes on
Shaniqua
Yeah , but aint you gonna tell me whats in
you pocket doe
Shaniuqa tried to grab for his pocket to fill
what’s in there. But Jermaine glanced back in fright
Jermaine
No I’m not gonna tell you cause your gunna
start running up your mouth asyou always do. And plus if the feds catch me or
anyone then I’m deep crap
Shnaiqua
Iyte iyte iyte mm I get you babes
Can I have a hug doe I’ve been longing for
one you get me
Jermaine
Ermmm, beg man don’t give hugs to dopey like
you, who eat any man, and crave for paper (laughing)
Shaniqua
(Kisses her teeth) chaa man your to faystey
Jermaine
(Laughing)
Jeamine walkes0
fast
down to the staircase on he swat to his next lesson.shaniqua follows
On there way down the stairs to the 4th
floor
Shaniqua
Wag warn with you doe you seem abit scared,
and angry , plus you don’t walk abit straight and your facial expressions , it
just doesn’t feel the same you ,when I look at you and when I chat to you ,like
are you iyte or something
Jemaine
Yeah…yeah…yeah… im all good
Shaniqua put her leg out to trip Jermaine
over , as jeamine trips he bangs hes head on the stair and twists his ankle.
Target: add extra adjectives to describe the
setting.
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