Friday, 9 November 2012


Scene 1

 Script 1

 Ext.outside (raining)

 Jemaine(14,tall,anti-social,moody) shaniqua(14,loud,rude,bossy)

 

  Scene 1

 

Jemaine is walking into school ,cant see were hes going and cant balance. He is finding it hard to concentrate bbecause of the drugs he took before he left out hes house

As jemaine bumps into shaniqua on hes way into school

Shaniqua

Whats going on with you doe? Cyan see taaraated

Jemaine (amgrly&droopy)

Move man

Shaniqua (rudly,jokly)

Chaa ,don’t get rude no who your talking to babes.

Jemaine

Why you talking doe, before I expose you.

School bell ring

Everyone rushed to their lesson 1, pushing and shoving, while jemaine walked slowly to hes lesson1

Jeamine

Sorry im late miss

Teacher

Its ok jemaine since your sorry

Jeamine walked into the lesson

Shaniqua lokked at him mysteriously and noticed that he was fiddling with somethink in hes pocket that she heard a packet opening at the back of classroom coming from jemaine pocket

The lesson finished.

Everyone got out of there seat without being dismissed by the teacher

  Jeamain walked swiftly out of the classroom while shaniqua following but trying not to be obvious that’s hses following him

 

Shaniqua

Iknow your hiding somethink give to me!

Jemaine

No why should I , your just a normal girl that girls my school , idont like you . so why d o you care about me or what im doing just leave me alone hwta ever is happening between me and my girlf reidn has nothink to do with you so move.

Shaniqua

k. I never involved you clapped girlfriend in this conversation so she can c herself out

jemaine

don’t chat me like were size ,(looks at her up and down0

your butters and all the mandem no that n that’s why you don’t get man, you follow and beg man so low your talks.

Shaniqua

Am I the one who sells ddrug for a living, ami the one who  live in a care home and don’t have a mum. So don’t try hype

Jemaine

Why did I even like you…. Like you butters and you beat anyman , like yo mum iyte.

Shaniqua

Ite, I was only joking about the care bit , that sabit too deep I take that back.

Jemaine

Iyte owel it’s the truth life goes on

Shaniqua

Yeah , but aint you gonna tell me whats in you pocket doe

Shaniuqa tried to grab for his pocket to fill what’s in there. But Jermaine glanced back in fright

Jermaine

No I’m not gonna tell you cause your gunna start running up your mouth asyou always do. And plus if the feds catch me or anyone then I’m deep crap

Shnaiqua

Iyte iyte iyte mm I get you babes

Can I have a hug doe I’ve been longing for one you get me

Jermaine

Ermmm, beg man don’t give hugs to dopey like you, who eat any man, and crave for paper (laughing)

Shaniqua

(Kisses her teeth) chaa man your to faystey

Jermaine

(Laughing)

Jeamine walkes0

 fast down to the staircase on he swat to his next lesson.shaniqua follows

On there way down the stairs to the 4th floor

Shaniqua

Wag warn with you doe you seem abit scared, and angry , plus you don’t walk abit straight and your facial expressions , it just doesn’t feel the same you ,when I look at you and when I chat to you ,like are you iyte or something

Jemaine

Yeah…yeah…yeah… im all good

Shaniqua put her leg out to trip Jermaine over , as jeamine trips he bangs hes head on the stair and twists his ankle.

 

 

 

                   

 

 

 

Target: add extra adjectives to describe the setting.

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