Scene 1
Script 1
Ext.outside (raining)
Jermaine(14,tall,anti-social,moody)
shaniqua(14,loud,rude,bossy)
Scene 1
Jermaine is walking into school ,cant see
were hes going and cant balance. He is finding it hard to concentrate because
of the drugs he took before he left out hes house
As Jermaine bumps into shaniqua on he’s way
into school
Shaniqua (wide shots)
Whats going on with you doe? Cyan see
taaraated
Jermaine (amgrly&droopy)
Move man
Shaniqua (rudly,jokly)
Chaa ,don’t get rude no who your talking to
babes.
Jermaine
Why you talking doe, before I expose you.
School bell ring
Everyone rushed to their lesson 1, pushing
and shoving, while Jermaine walked slowly to his lesson1
Jermaine (wide shot, looking at the camera)
Sorry im late miss
Teacher (wide shot)
Its ok Jermaine since your sorry
Jeamine walked into the lesson
Shaniqua looked at him mysteriously and
noticed that he was fiddling with somethink in hes pocket that she heard a
packet opening at the back of classroom coming from jemaine pocket
The lesson finished.
Everyone got out of there seat without being
dismissed by the teacher
Jeamain walked swiftly out of the classroom
while shaniqua following but trying not to be obvious that’s shes following him
Shaniqua
Iknow your hiding somethink give to me!
Jermaine
No why should I , your just a normal girl
that goes my school , idont like you . so why do you care about me or what im
doing just leave me alone whatever is happening between me and my girlfriend
has nothink to do with you so move.
Shaniqua
k. I never involved your clapped girlfriend
in this conversation so she can c herself out
Jermaine
don’t chat me like were size ,(looks at her
up and down)
your butters and all the mandem no that n
that’s why you don’t get man, you follow and beg man so low your talks.
Shaniqua
Am I the one who sells drugs for a living, am
i the one who lives in a care home and
don’t have a mum. So don’t try hype
Jermaine
Why did I even like you…. Like your butters
and you beat anyman , like yo mum iyte.
Shaniqua
Ite, I was only joking about the care bit ,
that’s abit too deep I take that back.
Jermaine
Iyte owel it’s the truth life goes on
Shaniqua
Yeah , but aint you gonna tell me whats in
your pocket doe
Shaniuqa tried to grab for his pocket to feel
what’s in there. But Jermaine glanced back in fright
Jermaine
No I’m not gonna tell you cause your gunna
start running up your mouth asyou always do. And plus if the feds catch me or
anyone then I’m deep crap
Shnaiqua
Iyte iyte iyte mm I get you babes
Can I have a hug doe I’ve been longing for
one you get me
Jermaine
Ermmm, beg man don’t give hugs to dopeys like
you, who eat any man, and crave for paper (laughing)
Shaniqua
(Kisses her teeth) chaa man your to faystey
Jermaine
(Laughing)
Jermaine
Joking
Jermaine hugs shaniqua (close up)
Jermaine walks
fast
down to the staircase on his way to his
next lesson.shaniqua follows
On there way down the stairs to the 4th
floor
Shaniqua
Wag warn with you doe you seem abit scared,
and angry , plus you don’t walk abit straight and your facial expressions , it
just doesn’t feel the same you ,when I look at you and when I chat to you ,like
are you iyte or something
Jermaine
Yeah…yeah…yeah… im all good
Shaniqua put her leg out to trip Jermaine
over , as jeamine trips he bangs his head on the stair and twists his ankle.
Scene 2
Script 2
Ext hospital (apple centre)
Jemaine wakes up in hospital looking around
to see where is he is because he cant make out that his in hospital with his blurry
vision
Jermaine (blinks twice, close up)
Where am I
Doctor
Right his up everyone
Nurses and doctors and social worker. rushed
through the curtains with there clipboards,papers and belongings.
Jermaine hesitated and tries to figure out
why hes in hospital.
As the social worker stepped forward and
introduced herself to Jermaine,
Social worker
Hello, I’m Sarah Jane I work for social
services, and I’m your social worker I
have been longing to meet you, other than that I am here to take you to your
new care home were you would be staying until we could find you a place near
your school, or contact your parents,
We have documented the accident with your mum
and I’m sorry for your lost , but we have managed to contact her grandparents.
Jermaine (confused tone of voice, towards the
camera, close up)
Ooohhh ok
Nurse
IDon’t
think Jermaine is feeling to good , so we should give him some time to relax
,and most probably we would dismiss him from the hospital around 7 or later.
Social worker
Alright I would wait in the waiting area or
possibly contact my boss and let them no his ok.
Nurse and doctor shock hands with the social
worker and said there goodbyes, as the doctor threw Jermaine his clothes.
Jermaine held his trousers and his jacket and
jumper tight.
Jermaine had realised that he last had
something in he’s pocket
He felt for his pocket and the drugs were
gone.
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